Blog Post 1

The first excerpt did not seem to read like an eloquent piece of writing. Although the excerpt described what was going on it did not go into depth about the “how’s” and the “why’s”, making the bit seems scattered or at least unanswered. The second was slightly more eloquent but I would also say economic. It gave a brief but vivid description, making every word count. The third did well with addressing the physical appearance and desires of the character. It was economic in the sense that the usage of “womanly figure” told the reader everything they needed to know.